Improving script

Today we had a lesson with Mr Webb who we showed the scripted scene we had created in the lesson priveus to this lesson. He gave his honest opnion on our scene which was that he liked it but said our dialogue was unbelieve as we didn't talk in the same ways a teacher would talk in a meeting so he helped us change our script to a more believeable conversation between teachers who were at a meeting. We went through our script line by line with with the guidance of our teacher where he make small changes to help suit a comedic or believable value for our script. After we had adapted our script we started our run through with the script and agreed that we all like the new version. I feel this was a helpful lesson as it has helpped expand our production creating realistic characters as well as helping us relise that in the future if we create more script we should get a teacher to read through the script. It has also made us relise that we should interview teachers and get their opinons on education, the future of education and what the teachers think is the problem with defiant students.