Today we came straight away and pull out our drafted scripts from last lesson and showed them to two teachers to gather their opinions on how to better the scenes. After reading the scripts they said that we needed to just change the phrasing of some lines as they weren't the exsact way a teacher would respond to each other. Another part we change was a section where Kyle reacted to an inappropriate comment from Toby, we changed this to Meg reacting as we thought it was more suitable wi5h her being the head of the meeting to react to the comment. After letting the teachers read the scripts we made the improvements they suggested before we ran though scene 2. I read in for our absence member in this scene which sets up our Future school piece, he setting was the same as the first scene being sat around a table in a circle so audience could see at least 2 teachers face at once. After we ran this scene we then tried scene 3 which sets up our corporal punishment future piece. This week has been a productive lesson as we have now set every part of our devised show except the ending which we decided is our goal for next lesson. Overall we had worked effectively as a group to get 2 scenes finished today as well as sort out what we can do next lesson.
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