Improving Corpral Punishment Future

Today we showed our Corpral Punisment piece to Mr Webb who said he understood what we wanted to try and accomplish but our delivary wasnt the best. He said the guards don't need to be dressed in riot gear or need the shields, he suggested we try the piece with Wooden rulers and that we should use them to move as well as to control the students. We changed the start of our piece from having the students already sitting to having them walking in military style in lines a formation from the back towards their seats. I am stood at the front while Kyle is stood at the back, we will always try to stay the other ends of the class to each other so we can obtain a realistic patrol. When the students reach their seat I lower my hand to show they can sit before moving my ruler left to right to show they can get their books out. We decided that we wouldn't let the guards talk to show a form of power over the students as we don't need to talk to control them. In the piece we show several incidents that happen in classes but how in our future school the guards respond to these incidents.
1. Passing a note
2. Getting out of your seat
3. Lying to guards
4. Arguing against punishment
At the back of the Square Dan trys to passing a note to Meg which I repond to by smacking his hand down using the ruler, Dan then drops his pen so stands up to pick it up at which point Kyle pushes him back to his seat with the ruler. Next Carl shouts out "stop kicking my chair" at which point Kyle extends Meg leg, who is sat behind Carl, then measures the distance between the leg and chair to clear see Meg is to far to kick the chair. Kyle as the guard responds to this by smack Carl's head on his desk. After this Toby stares at Kyle, Kyle goes to hit Toby but he dodges it and tries to attack the guard. Kyle restrains Toby so Dan tries to help him at which I respond by hitting him and throwing him to the ground. After this I gesture Meg and Carl out of their seats to leave before going to strike Toby ending the piece. I now really like this piece as I feel we have managed to create and show a realistic future basses round extreme corporal punishment which will help show the purpose of our devised piece.